I
stood atop a wall of my own making
I
thought its height was breathtaking
But
I knew that it enclosed me
And
I often felt quite lonely
So
I made a gate for those who may
Wish
to enter and brighten my day
I
kept it shut in times of war
And
opened up when peace was at the door
One
day a stranger came and called up to me
I
looked down from above in my fortress to see
A
man whose kind heart was full of sincerity
As
he spoke to me my mind gained in clarity
He
spoke of a land full of riches and harmony
And
the way he would show at great cost to me
All
that I had and that I’d gained
Must
be given to him ‘till nothing remained
I
knew it would be a great sacrifice
And
questioned how I could pay such a price
Not
all at once, he told me with compassion
One
brick or stone at a time from your mighty mansion
I
loosened a brick I had acquired with care
From
the lust and pride which held it on the wall there
I
took it to my new friend and offered it to him
He
had me place it at his feet almost as if on a whim
I
continued on for I knew he spoke the truth
Not
about some fairy tale like the fountain of youth
His
words made my heart ache and my soul sing
He
appeared meek and lowly but I thought he must be a king
I
took another stone and remembered why I placed it there
Every
experience, every idea, every desire, and every care
And
placed it at his feet again as he led me farther out
He
showed me a wondrous sight just as I began to doubt
The
world beyond my wall was more lovely than I knew
And
as my friend kept speaking my anticipation grew
But
I had to stop when I saw the look in my new friend’s face
He
told me that all these stones must be securely held in place
He
offered me a simple mortar of humility and trust
And
said that just a little was far better than pride and lust
So
I applied the mortar to the stones on the ground
Soon
they were stable-set and I was paradise-bound
Day
by day it went on in this manner
But
the king’s smiling face was above me a banner
I
held to his course brick by brick and stone by stone
Gratefully
trusting that I’d never be alone
Eventually
I saw atop a far hill
A
kingdom of light and endless good will
And
behind me a road from the old to the new
A
confusing life and a winding journey in my view
I
have since met others who’ve joined me on this way
Seen
those who were lost find this road and stay
And
though sometimes I may need a loving goad
I
know I’m bound for heaven on this road
Everything
which I had built up around me
Was
of a darkness that can no longer surround me
And
though my life is now laid down
I
know that with a new one I’ll be crowned
Because
the king spoke to me
Now
I can see
And
I’m free
Wow! This is an AWESOME poem! I love this! Wow, wow, wow!
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DeleteThis is really good! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks; I hoped you, quite the poet yourself, would like it! :)
DeleteAwesome!! What a creative and unique thought: brick by brick, Jesus turns my wall into my road.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I liked it, too (credit for the thought goes to God, I should think). And it didn't even occur to me until now to connect this poem I've written here with the fact that even the gold, silver, etc. used in the furniture of the tabernacle in the wilderness was from the stuff the Jews brought with them out of Egypt, the land of their slavery, but they are quite obviously parallel lines of thought. As you say: Awesome.
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